I See You
It was June 21st, the summer
solstice as people called it for it was the longest day of the year and Rix was
in his bedroom staring out the window. The window was one of three- it would
have been a normal rectangular window had it not been for the semicircle
addition at the top. The other two windows were slightly smaller replicas of
half the larger window. One was placed on each side of the large window and all
three almost completely covered the back wall. The sheer size of the windows
did not allow Rix to be inconspicuous. His windows afforded him a splendid view
of the neighbourhood, but everyone could see him; it was a view that lacked the
privacy a smaller window would have offered.
Rix was admiring the beautiful sunset- motley
of colours splayed across the sky as if the sky itself were a rainbow- yet the
setting sun allowed the trees to cast ominous shadows that danced in the breeze.
By the light of the setting sun, a disc of gold in the horizon, the shadows
appeared to be wraiths flitting about on the ground, as demonic looking as any
creature conjured from hell. It was a silent night, no one was strolling about.
From time to time the eerie silence was interrupted by a sudden gust of wind
rattling the branches. It would then caper off into silence again. The
stillness unnerved Rix. There were always people out, especially when the sun
was still out. However it was night even if it appeared to be late evening. His
watch said it was 9:04 pm- some people slept at 9.
BEEP! BEEP! Rix turned around. The sound
was coming from his laptop, which was opened up on his desk. It was a black
Toshiba that he had gotten as a gift for his 23rd birthday. His room
was brightly lit by a miniature chandelier and it illuminated the screen.
BEEP! BEEP! He sat down on his chair- one
of those rolling black ones that every Staples has in stock- and saw that it
was his girlfriend, Jasmine calling via Skype. He accepted the call.
Jasmine’s face appeared into view. Her
pearly white smile sparkled as her brown eyes shined with joy. Rix smiled to
himself. There was never a time when Jasmine was not happy to see him. Her
constant happiness was infectious and made him feel warm inside. She had
delicate features encased by a wreath of ebony curls that always smelled of her
namesake, with a faint wisp of roses and vanilla.
"Hey baby! Parent’s aren’t home just Ellie!
I have so much to tell you!" Ellie was Jasmine’s 17 year old sister. They
always argued but Jasmine adored her.
"Hey, how was your day? Seems like
you have a stories to tell, let’s hear it," said Rix, grinning broadly.
"So today I went out to get--" Jasmine started to say.
Tap,
Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap. "Did you hear that?
There’s a tapping sound coming from your side!" interrupted Rix. His face turned pale, almost as white as chalk. "There’s someone in
your house Jasmine. You should get out … now."
"Nice try Rixie,” said Jasmine, calling
him by his pet name. "I don’t scare as easily as I used to. Besides silly, it’s just a tree branch
tapping against my window," she said giggling.
Rix laughed. "I’ll scare you properly
someday!"
"Sure Rixie, keep dreaming," she said
affectionately. "Anyways as I was saying, today I went out to get--" She stopped
mid-sentence. "Rix, I think
someone’s really in the house," she said quietly. Her eyes widened in fear and her smile disappeared.
"Very funny. You know, there is an art to
scaring someone that you haven’t perfected Jasmine," said Rix laughing.
"It’s definitely not an art you've perfected!!" she said giggling.
Ellie stepped into Jasmine’s room. "Hey,
I’m going over to Shelly's house, I’ll be back within an hour," she
said.
Jasmine turned around. "More like you're going over to Stine's house," said Jasmine. Ellie shot her a dark look. " Don't worry, I don't care where you're going just be back before Mom and Dad get home. Lock the door
behind you."
"Yea, yea," Ellie said hurriedly. She left
the room. She ran down the stairs as her footsteps echoed in the silence of the
house. A few seconds later, Jasmine and
Rix heard the door slam shut.
"Finally she’s gone. I don’t want her
eavesdropping on everything I tell you," said Jasmine.
"She could be back soon, you never know! So if you want to talk, get talking," chuckled Rix.
"Ok, ok I’ll tell you what I was going to
say--" she stopped in mid-sentence again. She had heard her house door open.
Through Skype, Rix could hear it to.
“Looks like your parents are home,” said
Rix.
“I think so too, they're a bit early
though. I wasn’t expecting them until after 11.” She paused to think for a
second. “That’s weird I would’ve heard the jingle of their keys as they tried
to open the door ... Ellie!!” she groaned. “She forgot to lock the door, like
always. Maybe it’s Ellie coming back to
get her books, that wouldn't surprise me. Ok well-” She leaned her head
towards her bedroom door. She could hear voices drifting up towards her, voices
Rix could hear to- voices they could not recognize. The words spoken were indiscernible but it
was clear that the voices belonged to two men. Jasmine’s eyes widened, her fear almost tangible. This was not a joke Rix was playing, this was reality. There were actually people in her home. Her pulse started to race.
Her mind raced frantically with thoughts she could not control- thoughts of
ending up murdered and dead. She gulped as a trickle of sweat ran down her
face.
“Jasmine, listen to me. Minimize your Skype
screen so I can watch what’s happening and go hide under your bed. I’m going to
call 911,” said Rix amazingly calm. His heart was beating fast and he felt fear
take a hold of him. The warm feeling he had moments ago was replaced by an
uncharacteristic chill given the season. It was a chill borne of concern and
fear for Jasmine. He did not know what to expect but he knew he had to be
strong for her. If he panicked she would to and then all would be lost.
Luckily he had a view of most of her small
room. There was a fairly large bed with ornate carvings of roses on the maple
headboard, in the corner of her room. It was covered by a black duvet with
matching pillows. Her closet was opposite her bed and the desk upon which
Jasmine’s laptop rested was obviously out of sight. The carpet was of a dark
blue shade, which he could see ended at the doorway of her bedroom located
between her bed and closet. Beyond that he could not really see anything.
Thump.
Thump. The men had started to climb the stairs.
Each footstep echoed off the elm wood staircase, breaking the unearthly silence
of the house.
“Rix I’m scared,” whimpered Jasmine. She
knew they were getting closer to the top of the stairs. She knew it was a
matter of time before they would come to her room.
“I know you are honey but I’m going to get
you out of this. Now go hide under your bed. I love you,” he said confidently.
“Ok, I love you to,” she whispered. Her
voice trembled and faltered, as the tears started to come. She ran towards her
bed, her footsteps indiscernible on the nylon carpet. She lifted up the duvet
to get under the bed.
Rix watched in horror as realization hit
him. It would be hard for her to get under the bed
as the gap was not made for people to go under. Jasmine tried going head first.
She struggled to push through, but to no avail. In Jasmine’s panic she had
forgotten to close her bedroom door and turn off the room light. The men could
guess that someone was or had been in the room.
Thump.
Thump. Thump. The men were nearing the top of the
stairs. Rix frantically looked for his cell phone which he had left on his
desk. His desk was littered with papers and textbooks- typical of that of a
university student. He rifled through his papers but could not find his cell
phone. In his frustration he swept his papers and books off his desk,
frantically trying to locate his cell phone. He was starting to panic, his
sense of urgency driving him forward.
Jasmine pushed harder to get under the bed.
Her head made it through slightly, but then suddenly she was stuck. Rix glanced
at the screen to see Jasmine struggling to extricate herself from the grip of
the bed frame.
Rix
could sense that the men had come upstairs. He could hear them as they tried
jiggling the doorknob of the first room. He willed Jasmine to get under the
bed, his fear increasing with each second that passed.
“It’s locked,” a man with a slight French
accent said. The other man said nothing. Still Jasmine struggled to get under
the bed.
Thump.
Thump. They were starting to walk towards the next room
which happened to be Jasmine’s. Rix clenched his hair tightly and shut his eyes
for a moment, fearing the worst was about to happen, but opened them almost
instantaneously, knowing Jasmine needed him there. She started to wriggle more
frantically, but still she was unable to move.
Thump.
Thump. Their footsteps had gotten closer. Rix could
hear it echoing off of the hardwood floor.
Tap,
Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap. The footsteps stopped. “I hear a tapping
sound, I think maybe someone is inside that room,” said the man with the French
accent.
Rix froze unable to take his eyes away from
the screen. His hand started to tremble,
he held his breath, hardly daring to breathe.
Thump,
Thump. Their footsteps resumed and they stopped in
front of her doorway. Jasmine continued to wriggle barely concealed by the door. “This is
interesting. The light is on, someone is here for sure,” said the man with the
French accent. He paused. Rix could now see the man clearly. He had dark eyes
that could have been either black or brown. He had unkempt, brown hair with
stubble covering his pale skin. His face was marred by an ugly scar that stretched
from underneath is right eye, over the bridge of his nose and ended near his
left jawbone. It gave him an inhuman appearance- repulsive and terrifying at
the same time. The man who had not spoken stood slightly behind his partner,
his face out of view from Rix. Rix could see that the man had glossy black hair
and wore what appeared to be a well fitted leather jacket. It was a jacket that
spoke of wealth, with its charcoal black, glossy, uncracked appearance. It was a
stark contrast to the leather jacket worn by the man with the French accent.
His jacket had a dull sheen and it was cracked all over.
“Where could they be? We know one is
outside,” the man with the French accent said, laughing manically.
Rix felt goose bumps all over his arms. He
knew what he was talking about. They got to Ellie! he thought.
The man who had not spoke shook his head
ever so slightly as if to say, there is
no one here, if there was they would be dead .. like Ellie.
Tap,
Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap. “Ahh the tapping noise is
just that branch tapping against the window. Nothing to be concerned about I
guess,” the man with the French accent muttered.
Rix knew that if anything were to happen it
would happen within the next few minutes. His eyes stayed glued to the screen. Jasmine get under the bed, please get under the bed, he thought.
The men stepped into the room and glanced
around, appraising everything with their eyes slowly. Just as their eyes flitted towards Jasmine's bed, she pushed through, miraculously without making a sound. They stared at the bed for a moment, their gaze seemingly of a suspicious nature but then they turned away. Rix sighed in relief, close call, he thought. While the man with the French
accent looked all around, his face visible to Rix, the other man’s face was
never visible. His face was turned so perfectly that Rix could not get a
glimpse of who he was at all. It was as if he knew that Rix was watching them
through his laptop. It was an unsettling feeling and panic threatened to engulf
him.
Rix glanced at the man’s hand. What he saw nearly made him scream. He bit his tongue hard, trying to stave off the terror that was overwhelming him. Hanging from the man’s hand was a knife. Dripping from the blade was blood. It dripped steadily towards the ground. Now that he was focused on the knife he could hear the drip.. drip.. drip.. as the blood fell like tears. He knew it was Ellie’s blood. These men were not just intruders. They were people who had killed and would not hesitate to do it again. If they found Jasmine, the game would be over.
Rix glanced at the man’s hand. What he saw nearly made him scream. He bit his tongue hard, trying to stave off the terror that was overwhelming him. Hanging from the man’s hand was a knife. Dripping from the blade was blood. It dripped steadily towards the ground. Now that he was focused on the knife he could hear the drip.. drip.. drip.. as the blood fell like tears. He knew it was Ellie’s blood. These men were not just intruders. They were people who had killed and would not hesitate to do it again. If they found Jasmine, the game would be over.
“Should we take the laptop?” asked the man
with the French accent, gesturing in Rix's direction. The other man shook his
head and gestured towards the closet with his knife. The man with the French
accent obediently opened the closet and ransacked it for valuables. He tossed
aside clothing as he muttered under his breath about how no one had anything of
worth in their houses these days. His partner watched him, the back of his head
facing Rix. He was motionless the entire time, even the hand holding the knife
did not move as his partner continued to search for valuables. He seemed almost statue-like but the constant drip..
drip.. drip.. as the blood fell to the ground, reminded Rix, that man was dangerous. The man with the French accent was about to give up the
search when he found a pair of gold and crystal earrings, evidently
very expensive. He smiled with glee. This would do.
Tap,
Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap. Rix watched as the man pocketed the earrings
he had gotten for Jasmine’s 22nd birthday a few weeks ago. The man
with the knife gestured towards the doorway, his indication that they should
leave. Rix sighed in relief. Jasmine would be ok, nothing would happen to her. He looked at his desk again and finally spotted his
cell phone behind a textbook he had not thrown off the table. He immediately dialed 911.
“Hello, what is your emergency?” a monotone
voice said on the other end.
"I need help. My-my girlfriend is being
robbed, I-I think her sister might be dead,” he whispered into the phone. He
did not have to whisper but he felt as if the man with the knife was standing
just a few feet away and not in his Jasmine's house. Seeing everything
through his laptop screen made it only too real for him. His sweaty hands
struggled to keep their grip on his phone.
The man with the French accent paused a
moment. “Do you hear a sound?”
The man with a knife slowly nodded his head. It must be
the tapping of the tree branch on Jasmine’s window that they can hear ...
because I can still hear it to, thought Rix.
“ Ok Rix, I want you to calm down and tell
me where your girlfriend lives,” the dispatcher said.
“13 Petals Road,” he whispered frantically.
The man with the knife slowly turned around
and walked towards the bed. Rix’s pulse started to race. Why are they coming back, they were just about to leave! “Please
hurry up, they’re going towards the bed!” Rix screamed into the phone.
“Please calm down. Nothing will happen to
your girlfriend. She will be fine. The police will be there within 10 minutes,”
said the dispatcher in an infuriatingly calm voice.
Suddenly the man with the knife looked
under the bed. “They’ve found her, please help her!” Rix sobbed. Then a thought struck him. He froze. “I think they heard me,” he whispered into the
phone. He could only watch in horror as the man with the knife dragged Jasmine
out from under the bed.
Rix could hear Jasmine screaming his name and begging for someone to help her. Rix could only stare, powerless to help as she struggled against the man with the knife. Still Rix could not see his face.
The lights in the room suddenly turned off and her screams abruptly stopped. Rix held his breath, not knowing what to do. Then a guttural voice came through the speakers. It was a voice that would send anyone running to hide under their bed. “I See You,” the voice laughed and the screen went blank.
The lights in the room suddenly turned off and her screams abruptly stopped. Rix held his breath, not knowing what to do. Then a guttural voice came through the speakers. It was a voice that would send anyone running to hide under their bed. “I See You,” the voice laughed and the screen went blank.
“They’ve got her –hello?! Hello?!” Rix
screamed into the phone.
Nobody was on the other end, the call had
been disconnected.
Oh man, that was good. Gave me chills with that last bit. descriptions are really specific and concrete. You definitely have a knack for storytelling. Keep it up!